By the sea

Ethan Bethune Bleeding Ink, poetry November 21, 2015 1 Minute

Everyone was talking

Everyone was pointing

Everything was echoes

But your kiss

Your lips

Spoke louder

Like thunder in the sea

And

I became

Galaxies

Published by Ethan Bethune

Ethan lives in Alabama with his shelter dog and cat, Simon and Francis. View all posts by Ethan Bethune

Published November 21, 2015

2 thoughts on “By the sea ”

” I became galaxies ” the imagery in that line is mind blowing

Ethan Bethune says:

November 23, 2015 at 1:08 pm

Thanks so much for reading and Sharing your thoughts.

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